In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development.

In the contemporary world,

the

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shopping is a famous activity among

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people

. Most

people

expect to

fulfill

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their

need

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needs

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under

a

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same roof and they are not preferred to purchase

items

everywhere in the towns

such

as

tiny

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in tiny

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shops. There are benefits and drawbacks

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that can

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be observed during

this

shopping and

this

essay would discuss what are the advantages and disadvantages of

this

aspect. In my opinion,

people

may have

grater

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advantages when doing the shopping in the large shopping malls than

the

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in the

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local mini-stores.

First

and foremost, due to the busyness and tight work schedule,

personals

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have quite limited time

to

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for

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such

activities as shopping. Most of them looking

for

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to

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complete their task within a

first

attempt.

For instance

, the large

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supermarkets

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super markets

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supermarkets

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contain

its

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their

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own car parks with enormous space.

In addition

to that, they have all the household

items

,

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clothes

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cloths

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clothes

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and shoes, grocery

items

including fish,

vegetable

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vegetables

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and fruits,

hardware

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and hardware

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items

.

Additionally

, the dining places will be provided to the

customers

to accomplish their tasks.

Therefore

, shopping complex owners are able to attract

customers

towards

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them.

On the other hand

,

people

are refusing and

reduce

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reducing

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to

buy

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buying

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the necessary

items

due to the uncomfortably from small shops,

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will be an issue for their survival. Because of

this

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also

provide their

suppler

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supplier

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for the country’s economy as well as it will be difficult to maintain their business,

families

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and families

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.

However

, the threats and risks will arise

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their end.

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, lack of parking inconvenience way of paying,

lack

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and lack

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of spaces in the shops may direct

to

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away the

customers

.

Additionally

, sometimes, they may

unable

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be unable

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to deal with the cards and online transactions

also

drives

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toward the inefficient way of dealing

such

as

unable

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being unable

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to pay by

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car

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cars

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card

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, online,

it

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will drive towards

the

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negative way the

customers

. To conclude, there

are

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major

advantage

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advantages

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are

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that are

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able to

deliver

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delivering

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to the customer’s end than the disadvantage.

Further

, the consumers are able to catch

the

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bunch of positive matters from the large malls than the small ones. In my purview,

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society will have vast benefits when

comparing

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compared

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to the drawbacks.