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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development.

#years #shops #customers #travel #centers #malls #development
In the contemporary world,
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shopping is a famous activity among
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people
. Most
people
 expect to
fulfill
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 their
need
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needs
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 under
a
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 same roof and they are not preferred to purchase
items
 everywhere in the towns
such
 as
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 shops. There are benefits and drawbacks
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 be observed during
this
 shopping and
this
 essay would discuss what are the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 aspect. In my opinion,
people
 may have
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 advantages when doing the shopping in the large shopping malls than
the
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in the
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 local mini-stores.
First
 and foremost, due to the busyness and tight work schedule,
personals
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 have quite limited time
to
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such
 activities as shopping. Most of them looking
for
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to
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 complete their task within a
first
 attempt.
For instance
, the large
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supermarkets
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super markets
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supermarkets
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 contain
its
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their
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 own car parks with enormous space.
In addition
 to that, they have all the household
items
,
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clothes
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cloths
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clothes
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 and shoes, grocery
items
 including fish,
vegetable
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vegetables
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 and fruits,
hardware
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and hardware
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items
.
Additionally
, the dining places will be provided to the
customers
 to accomplish their tasks.
Therefore
, shopping complex owners are able to attract
customers
towards
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 them.
On the other hand
,
people
 are refusing and
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 to
buy
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buying
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 the necessary
items
 due to the uncomfortably from small shops,
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 will be an issue for their survival. Because of
this
 show owners
also
 provide their
suppler
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supplier
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 for the country’s economy as well as it will be difficult to maintain their business,
families
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and families
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.
However
, the threats and risks will arise
for
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 their end.
For example
, lack of parking inconvenience way of paying,
lack
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and lack
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 of spaces in the shops may direct
to
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away the
customers
.
Additionally
, sometimes, they may
unable
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be unable
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 to deal with the cards and online transactions
also
drives
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 toward the inefficient way of dealing
such
 as
unable
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being unable
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 to pay by
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car
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cars
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card
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, online,
it
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will drive towards
the
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 negative way the
customers
. To conclude, there
are
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 major
advantage
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advantages
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are
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that are
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 able to
deliver
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delivering
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 to the customer’s end than the disadvantage.
Further
, the consumers are able to catch
the
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 bunch of positive matters from the large malls than the small ones. In my purview,
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society will have vast benefits when
comparing
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 to the drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • community character
  • specialized products
  • homogenized
  • local economy
  • circulating
  • variety
  • convenient
  • social hubs
  • infrastructure
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • energy consumption
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