The planets population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of respurces like water and food. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight over population

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Nowadays, there is an uncontrolled increase in the

population

of each country. It is reaching unsustainable levels and thereby facing problems related to food and water. Because of overpopulation leads to many issues, that will be pointed out in

further

paragraphs.

First

of all, when compared to ancient times, the

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increase in the birth rate of each country. , at that time there were no well-known travel facilities, medicines et al and

also

pure feed, so many acres of vacant lands, good air etc. But nowadays, facing many problems with lack of drink, food and pure air. Populace density is increasing day by.day. so that some countries will have taken some preventive measures to cure

such

situations.

For example

, the Indian government implemented two children rule, and China

also

controls their birth rate.

Secondly

, increased

population

outbreaks, should reduce the job opportunities, and increases competition. So many educated people

also

face problems regarding their job opportunities. With the effect of that people struggle facing to meet their daily expenses and suffered a lot for their basic needs.

On the other hand

, the cultivable land is used for building homes and industries there will be a lack of feed and drink. All the water sources are polluted because of the

population

increase.

For example

, the river Ganga has much more important in the tradition of Indian culture, but unfortunately,

this

is the most polluted river in the country. In conclusion, based on my opinion if we do not control the

population

, there will be some negative effects related to the reduced production rate of food and water. Most of them are using groundwater for their daily life it

also

has serious health issues too.

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wildlife habitats
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The planets population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of respurces like water and food. To what consequences may over population lead? In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight over population

Your opinion

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today many children and teenagers are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons to explain why many young people are obese and give some solutions to fix the problem.

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