People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

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jail and there are others who reckon that, to minimize the

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prison

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is not only the solution, it can be achieved in different ways.In my point of view, I believe that

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society

there are more effective ways other than jail.

To begin

with, some individuals think the only way to reduce the

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to longer prison. The

offenders

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in huge

crimes

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as murders,rapes,

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and other things should be punished in a manner that no one should forget about the punishment given to the criminal and once again it should not happen in

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duration behind the bars is the effective solution. To illustrate, In

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that in Dubai,

offenders

involved in rape and

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harassment

of women are given

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prison.

On the other hand

, there are individuals involved in some petty

crimes

such

as

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pickpockets

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the rules of

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. For these

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jail is not a solution

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them.

Furthermore

, individuals can be fined for not following the rules and for petty cases an education awareness can be given to make criminals

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of the nation and to the environment.

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, by using these ways,we can reduce the

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society

.

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, in India,

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provided to make them a proper person for the

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strategy

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rates are minimized. To conclude, I believe the criminals engaged in major

crimes

, which caused heavy loss to the people and

society

should be given

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prison

sentence

and

offenders

involved in small

crimes

can be given small punishments can be provided.