In recent times, technological advancements
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provided better instruments to produce melodious tunes. A fraction of individuals
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that songs help to gather humans irrespective of their ethnic groups and whether they are children, adults or the elderly.
This
essay will discuss with reasons why I strongly agree with
this
perspective.
To begin
with,
music
is a universal language that cuts across different linguistic barriers.
This
is due to the fact that
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people from various walks of life are able to decipher the emotions produced by a song.
As a result
,
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is a significant tool for social interaction and a means of human expression.
For example
, statistics published by the Ministry of Arts and Humanities in Lagos, Nigeria, showed that across over two hundred and fifty tribes in the region, people sing, dance and celebrate
music
at public gatherings either weddings,
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as well as life ceremonies. The above informs that humans grossly relate to beautiful sounds.
Furthermore
, improved health condition along with mood stability is an imperative
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of acoustic
music
.
This
is owing to the fact that meaningful rhythm is
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and helps to enhance
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mood.
For instance
, a personal encounter
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observed with depressed patients' is that they are somewhat excited when listening to their favourite artists
thus
, it helps them to play, have a good mental state and exit their depressive state. To put together,
music
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well-being of its audience.
In conclusion, despite various sentiments and reservations about its effect, I firmly believe that
music
is a force to reckon with if, there is a need to unite individuals in any community.