A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words.

Dear Elizabeth, I was thinking you were lost since I had not gotten any letters from you in the
last
few months. Happy to know that you are fine over there. From the letter which I received from you yesterday, I came to know that you are looking for a job-oriented university
course
. I recommend
you
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'Financial Accounting', a specialized
course
at 'The Victoria', the university I completed the same
last
year. I’m pretty sure that
this
course
can give you comprehensive training in accounting. You know one thing?
This
is the
course
which was the most demanded
last
year. I know that you'll be more comfortable with personalized trainers. 'The Victoria' is well-known for
this
. You will be getting your individual lecturers who will guide you all through the
course
. Don't find it confusing regarding the enrolment procedure. It's very transparent, as it is done completely online from submitting the application till you pay the
first
-semester fee as your seat is confirmed. I'm sure that the university will never make you disappointed. Hey! Don't forget to convey my regards to Markie. Ask him to write to me. Best regards, Catherine
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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