A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear Areeza, Thank you very much for agreeing with me to stay at my place while I am visiting my sister in California. I have a flight at 11 PM but I will be leaving the house in the afternoon around 3 PM. I will leave the key for the main entrance in the garden shed. You can get into the house using that key and in the drawing-room inside the yellow flower pot, there are keys for the rest of the rooms. By the way, Can I ask you for help? Please water the plan twice a week as it’s really important that the soil has moisture.

Besides

, I am expecting an important letter from the health care department. I’d really appreciate it if you can send a picture of a letter once you receive any from the relevant department.q I will be back in London on 22nd March. My flight will land at 1 AM, I will

then

take a cab so I will be home by around 3 AM. I don’t want you to be up so late as I have keys I will manage to enter the house. Make yourself comfortable and feel at home. Thank you once again! Best Regards, KG

Submitted by Krishna.gandhi on Mon Jun 20 2022

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