Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: Describe the problem with the dog. Explain why it is important for you to sleep Outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.

Dear
Mr.
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Anderson, Greetings of the day! I am writing
this
letter to tell you about the issue faced by me because of the noisy behaviour of your dog at night. The American bully dog that you purchased
last
Sunday has been creating a lot of noise since the very
first
night. It started barking from 1 AM to 4 AM daily which is causing me sleeplessness and I got a severe headache due to
this
.
Moreover
, as I am a construction supervisor, I require a sound sleep at night to make myself able to work properly with machines.
However
, your dog’s
high intensity
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barking noise is totally absurd for my health.
Therefore
, I want you to shift the dog house to some other area of your house or call an animal doctor for a checkup to find out the reason behind its noisy nature. A legal discourse would be followed against you if you do not try to solve
this
problem timely. I hope you would consider the genuinity of my situation and act
accordingly
. I look forward to hearing from you soon in
this
regard. Regards, Harry Brown
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