Some people say patriotism causes problems and is negative overall. Others feel that it is beneficial for society at large. Do the advantages of patriotism outweigh its disadvantages?

The

notion

of

patriotism

is somewhat

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. Some people assume it

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a totally negative,

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belief.

However

, others think that it can bring

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amount of benefits to society. In fact, there are a lot of drawbacks

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this

notion

despite some positive impacts. Generally,

patriotism

contributes to the strength of a

nation

due to the fact that it makes a certain nationality together by encouraging the spirit of unity. Most

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the countries have been established on

patriotism

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foundation.

Moreover

, the more patriotic the citizens are, the more developments will be brought to the

nation

.

This

is because citizens use much of their strength and ability for the interest of their mother

nation

out of

patriotism

, making the country more powerful and prosperous.

On the other hand

, there are loads of disadvantages of

patriotism

outweighing the strengths.

Firstly

,

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discrimination

descrimination

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discrimination

is originally a part of

patriotism

, which puts a certain nationality prior in every sector and believes other nationalities are inferior.

This

could lead to

violation

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of equality.

Secondly

,

patriotism

is an obstacle to the inflow of qualified foreign human resources into the

nation

. If the citizens were over patriotic, foreigners would not be satisfied

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working in those countries.

Last

but not least, it is

also

a very dangerous

notion

, which can create national extremism and supremacism.

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were a lot of crises

happened

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out of extreme

patriotism

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along

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the global history

such

as genocides and wars.

Patriotism

have

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been a

necessary

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for society and it

also

has some advantages.

However

, it could

also

create considerable disadvantages and

therefore

,

patriotism

is a

notion

that

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to be replaced by a better one.