Desribe an important decision you have made. Why did you make that decision? What was the result?
A couple of years ago, I had to take an important decision to move to another country. It was particularly a difficult one because shifting to another place changes everything, from friends and family to finances and social life.
Finally
one day, I decided to go to South Korea. I didn't know the Korean language but I was ready to take this
challenge to experience a different life. It's not always easy, but I was glad to come out of my comfort zone, make new friends and broaden my horizon. Moving to South Korea helped me gain confidence by getting along with new people, who encouraged me to develop adventurous qualities in me. Even though today we are far away from each other ,still I'm in touch with them. This
was the main result of my move to South Korea. Finally
, the results of this
investigation were published in a Correct your spelling
scientific
scientic
magazine.Correct your spelling
scientific
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite