The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
The environment is
a
important thing for every single life on the earth not only for humans. So the best way for saving the earth is not to increase the Change the article
an
fuel
price
but to reduce, reuse and recycle. Raising the fuel
price
will cause many problems then
I absolutely disagree with this
statement.
Firstly
, fuel
energy and economy are related to each other, if a country tries to raise the fuel
price
, the economy will collapse and every service fee will be increasing
but normal people still have the same income. Wrong verb form
increased
For instance
, when the price
of gas is raising
transportation costs are going to grow Correct your spelling
rising
up
the same as the ratio of previous profits. Change preposition
at
Therefore
we can save the world by many option
but in my notion,it must not Change to a plural noun
options
to
be raising the Change the verb form
apply
fuel's
Change noun form
fuel
price
because this
is a really bad way for our economy and can lead the world to be harder to
a poor country.
Change preposition
for
Secondly
, Reducing and Reusing are
the best way to save the environment because we can reuse our thing Change the verb form
is
such
as plastic bottle and paper
once again or maybe until it is unusable. So we are unnecessary to waste more paper
and plastic. For example
, many offices usually waste paper
for their work routine but
,Correct word choice
apply
actually
they can use paperless devices Add a comma
,actually
such
as Ipad or Tablet
to work as good as Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
paper
. Thus
, we can save the environment by many methods, it is unnecessary to be a huge solution but we can start from ourselves and begin from our home and office.
In conclusion, fuel
and energy are a dramatic necessity for humans, and in this
present day, we can not live without them so it is absolutely a bad idea to save the world by Correct determiner usage
the
discourage
the Change the verb form
discouraging
price
of fuel
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