The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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important thing for every single life on the earth not only for humans. So the best way for saving the earth is not to increase the

fuel

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price

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but to reduce, reuse and recycle. Raising the

fuel

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price

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will cause many problems

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I absolutely disagree with

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statement.

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,

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energy and economy are related to each other, if a country tries to raise the

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price

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, the economy will collapse and every service fee will be

increasing

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but normal people still have the same income.

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, when the

price

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of gas is

raising

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rising

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transportation costs are going to grow

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the same as the ratio of previous profits.

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we can save the world by many

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but in my notion,it must not

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be raising the

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fuel's

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price

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because

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is a really bad way for our economy and can lead the world to be harder

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a poor country.

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, Reducing and Reusing

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the best way to save the environment because we can reuse our thing

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as plastic bottle and

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once again or maybe until it is unusable. So we are unnecessary to waste more

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and plastic.

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, many offices usually waste

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for their work routine

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apply

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,

actually

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they can use paperless devices

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as Ipad or

Tablet

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to work as good as

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.

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, we can save the environment by many methods, it is unnecessary to be a huge solution but we can start from ourselves and begin from our home and office. In conclusion,

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and energy are a dramatic necessity for humans, and in

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this

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present day, we can not live without them so it is absolutely a bad idea to save the world by

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discouraging

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the

price

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of

fuel

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.