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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

#examinations #student #performance #coursework #projects
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It is commonly known that
students
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 need to pass
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 to prove that they are ready to move to the
next
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 grade. We have noticed that the procedures of assessing
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'
skills
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 develop into new styles and techniques just to meet
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’ needs. I strongly agree with the new methods of assessing
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’ performance which is the continual assessment for some reasons. pupils might be talented in a field that does not meet in formal
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. as well as formal
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 sometimes are not reasonable because of the amount of information that a student should cover to pass it.
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 of all, the number of
students
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 is enormous and each one of them is special in some way. one systematic way cannot fit all of them.
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, a student who is smart in music might lack the basic
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 needed to pass the math test.
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, applying for formal
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 that require certain
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 will be an injustice for many
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 who are talented in totally different subjects. We cannot test a fish for flying
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. It is simply unfair
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 if they will not put into their consideration the differences in
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' abilities.
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, formal
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 must of the
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 cover a very large amount of knowledge.
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,
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 should memories all of the information.
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 requires time and effort for something that might not be used even in real
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.
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, why it is necessary for
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 to study the multiplication table while in the future they will use an electronic calculator to add or subtract, and why they need to memorise the correct spelling for tons of words while in the practical
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 they can use spelling checker on computers.
on the other hand
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, continual assessment can clearly reveal
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students
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’
skills
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 and abilities for practical
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. To conclude, the new technics to assess
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 like coursework and projects are more effective to meet
students
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' differences. Actually with the development of
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 people tend to discover new methods to make their
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 much better. Above all, continual assessment meets
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' needs and
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 their talents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standardized assessment
  • criteria
  • benchmark
  • performance comparison
  • evaluation under pressure
  • simulate
  • real-world scenarios
  • time management
  • comprehensive coverage
  • subject grasp
  • objectivity
  • lifelong learning
  • engagement
  • practical application
  • skill development
  • creativity
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving abilities
  • individualized feedback
  • student well-being
  • exam stress
  • academic environment
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