Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Community

work

are

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becoming popular as parents are encouraging their kids to engage in them. Some are of the opinion that

teens

should partake in payless

community

activities in their free

time

as

this

can be of benefit to both

teenagers

as well as the

community

.

This

essay will discuss why I totally support the opinion. The two main reasons are

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improvement personal skills and great for their CV.

First

of all,

teens

who

involved

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in

community

work

significantly improve their personal development skills compared to those who didn’t.

This

is because by interacting with members of the neighbourhood, they get to experience life

everyday

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as it comes

therefore

, patience, tolerance, self-confidence and importantly, compassion for others

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built.

Secondly

, it's an important opportunity for those

teenagers

looking forward to getting a job in the future. A CV which contains

such

work

experiences

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what managers fish out for these days because it portrays a hardworking, compassionate, and resilient individual.

Teenagers

are the bedrock of any society

therefore

; their

work

will be of utmost importance to the development of the

community

. By having

teens

involved in

community

work

, parents or elders ‘neighbours have some weights lifted off their

shoulder

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. Chores sure as lawing, babysitting, and cleaning on weekends,

for instance

, could give more

time

for families to bond.

Also

, the rate of crimes will

significantly

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reduce

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. All the

time

used in creating chaos will be channelled into creating a better life for themselves thereby, limiting crime rates in the society. In conclusion,

teens

partaking in payless

community

activities in their free

time

can be of benefit to both

teenagers

as well as the

community

. I absolutely support

this

.