You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there. Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter -Explain how you heard about the job -Describe the kind of job you would like to have - Give details of your experience and qualifications Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the job advertisement for the work opportunity in your department store that I saw on the local notice board in my neighbourhood. Therefore
, I would like to submit my application.
I noticed from the job description that you require someone who can join as a full-time employee and who is well-versed in maintaining the accounts of the store. As a B.com graduate, I would like to take on roles and responsibilities related to account-keeping and managing the finances of your shop. Moreover
, I am good at handling marketing-related jobs which could also
help you in sales by attracting more consumers.
Furthermore
, I would like to highlight that I have completed an internship at a top accounting firm named Delloite as a financial analyst. while
pursuing under graduation. Apart from that I have numerous certificates in accounts and marketing management. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me some more details about the role and also
let me know if the morning shift is available as I do not have a bike or car to commute during the night.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Neeja MalanSubmitted by neejamalan0420 on
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task achievement
Include specific qualifications and skills relevant to the job for a more tailored application.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph covers a distinct point or idea for better clarity.
greeting and closing
The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings, maintaining a formal and respectful tone.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task promptly and includes relevant personal details.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite