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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
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The charts given illustrates the usage of washing machine, refrigerator and
vaccum
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vacuum
 cleaner in one country and the amount of time spent doing household work between 1920 and 2019. It is apparent from the chart that
households
 owning electrical appliances increased substantially over the years
in
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apply
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compared
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 to the number of hours spent doing housework per week. Turning to the table with
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
households
 with electrical appliances, in 1920 no
households
 owned refrigerators
whereas
 30% and 40% of
households
 owned
vaccum
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vacuum
 cleaners and washing machines respectively. The
ownners
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owners
 of
fridgers
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fridges
 boomed to 90% by 1960 and it kept growing to 100% by 1980 and remained the same till 2019.
similarly
,
households
 owning
vaccum
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vacuum
 cleaners surged dramatically to 100% by the year 2000 and remained plateau.
On the other hand
,
households
 owning washing machines fluctuated but by 2019 more than 70% owned
it
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one
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. With the owning of electrical
appliances
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,appliances
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 the number of hours of household
workhad
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work had
dripped
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dropped
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 by 40% from 1920 to 2019.
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