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What are the reasons of increasing pollution and how can be solved it?

#pollution
Pollution is everywhere and
it
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is an ever-increasing problem. When we look at the air, it is not clean.
Similarly
, the most important element of our life water is not even drinkable or marine life is in danger because of the
plastic
 material or nuclear weapon testing. The solution is not as hard as people think it is very simple, individuals and governments need to work together to build a green, healthy living environment. One of the main causes behind the acceleration of pollution is the use of
plastic
products
. Polyethene-based materials are not disposable to the soil and it says on the surface of the water and gourd.
As a result
, plants cannot grow and marine inhabitants die because of eating those plastics.
For example
, United
Nations
 released statistics in the year 2019 on
plastic
products
, based on the study it is alarming that more than eighty per cent of total waste are polyehtilin-based
products
.
In addition
 to
this
, the
second
 most reason for high pollution is mass life-threatening war weapon testing. It is common for
nations
 to show their power by firing some ballistic missiles in the ocean
consequently
this
 causes huge damage to the ocean Inhabitat as well it impacts negatively on the number of Carbon-di-oxide in the air. One of the ways we can resolve
this
 is by creating awareness in individuals not to use
plastic
-based
products
 and banning all
plastic
-producing companies. Authorities can advertise on television, social media and billboards the unhealthy sides of plastics and putting on high taxes on cheap
plastic
 will discourage people not to
use
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 it.
Moreover
, a peaceful world will make the environment and nature in a healthy state. Having friendly and happy relationships between all
nations
 is the key to not making mass destruction war machines. In conclusion, banning or high tax rate on
plastic
 items as well as a good relationship between neighbouring
nations
 will help to build
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 and pollution-free world.
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