Foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people when visiting the local historical and cultural tourist attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the world, the number of

tourists

visiting historical

places

is growing thanks to the development of technology and transportation.

Therefore

, some

people

believe that foreign visitors should pay more than residents. I strongly believe that the amount of money that

tourists

pay for visiting should be more than local inheritors.

This

essay will explain the reasons for

this

argument. There are various reasons why

tourists

have to give more payment to visit historical

places

or a museum while local

people

can see these

places

by buying cheap tickets.

Firstly

, the percentage of the

tourists

who come to visit historical and cultural attractions is generally higher than the proportion of the

people

who already live in

this

same city.

Thus

, it is thought reasonable that they should be charged more money than others. Because running these kinds of buildings and attractions requires some business like cleaning, lightening services and other staffs, they are expected to pay

higher

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amount of money.

Furthermore

, the more visitors are increasing the more historical

places

are likely to destroy with

regards

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regard

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to buildings and the environment.

In other words

, when the

places

are attracted more

people

than

it

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could effort, some

part

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parts

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of the buildings and

places

certainly will have damaged.

For example

, most of the beaches and coastal side of the country suffer from

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a litter

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of

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humans.

Therefore

, these devastating results of visitor behaviours need to change and fix by bringing the expensive payments. In conclusion, all over the world

people

love to travel to other countries to see their historical

places

and cultures. I consider that the disparity of the ticket prices for visiting historical

places

between foreign

tourists

and local

people

should be encouraged by the government or local authorities to survive these attractions