Foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people when visiting the local historical and cultural tourist attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the world, the number of
tourists
visiting historical
places
is growing thanks to the development of technology and transportation.
Therefore
, some
people
believe that foreign visitors should pay more than residents. I strongly believe that the amount of money that
tourists
pay for visiting should be more than local inheritors.
This
essay will explain the reasons for
this
argument. There are various reasons why
tourists
have to give more payment to visit historical
places
or a museum while local
people
can see these
places
by buying cheap tickets.
Firstly
, the percentage of the
tourists
who come to visit historical and cultural attractions is generally higher than the proportion of the
people
who already live in
this
same city.
Thus
, it is thought reasonable that they should be charged more money than others. Because running these kinds of buildings and attractions requires some business like cleaning, lightening services and other staffs, they are expected to pay
higher
Add an article
a higher
show examples
amount of money.
Furthermore
, the more visitors are increasing the more historical
places
are likely to destroy with
regards
Fix the agreement mistake
regard
show examples
to buildings and the environment.
In other words
, when the
places
are attracted more
people
than
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
could effort, some
part
Fix the agreement mistake
parts
show examples
of the buildings and
places
certainly will have damaged.
For example
, most of the beaches and coastal side of the country suffer from
litter
Add an article
a litter
the litter
show examples
of
Change preposition
by
show examples
humans.
Therefore
, these devastating results of visitor behaviours need to change and fix by bringing the expensive payments. In conclusion, all over the world
people
love to travel to other countries to see their historical
places
and cultures. I consider that the disparity of the ticket prices for visiting historical
places
between foreign
tourists
and local
people
should be encouraged by the government or local authorities to survive these attractions
Submitted by fatmaymc23 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: