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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world?

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The popularity of tourism all over the world is playing a vital role in being the
English
language
 superior to any other
language
.
Therefore
, It is thought that
English
 will be the only used
language
 in the world.
However
, In
this
essay
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 I will discuss the positive and negative aspects of
this
 argument. On
one
 hand, using
English
 by individuals is playing a crucial role for international students around the world, by exchanging cultures and engaging themselves in foreign societies.
For example
, while the number of overseas students is increasing dramatically, most German universities have recently announced more than twenty educational programs taught in
English
 in each field of study. In ,addition using
one
language
 could support international
student's
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 lifestyles by contributing to many local activities during the period of the study.
On the other hand
, the drawbacks of having
one
 spoken
language
 should be taken into account because neglecting the other languages means the disappearing of most significant historical cultures ,
therefore
, It is observed how some governments are trying to preserve their previous history by keeping the native
language
 as a fundamental subject during all educational stages. For ,instance Syrian culture is considered
one
 of the most important cultures because it's Arami
language
 which was discovered two hundred years ago. To conclude, despite the positive impacts of using
one
language
 internationally,there are many disadvantages that should be taken into consideration.
Therefore
, I would recommend all societies and organisations raise awareness of using
one
language
 more rather than other languages and it would be beneficial if
this
 method corporated in school subjects
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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