Write about the following topic: The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern globalized world, the marketplace is witnessing dramatic changes causing difficulties for employees depending on old working conditions and jobs that were in demand in past but are not anymore.
While
the economic problems that can result are complex, fundamental solutions such
as new professional orientation subjects in school and various employment help from specific organisations should be taken to tackle those possible economic dangers.
Increasing levels of poverty in certain regions is one of the potential threats to the local economy, in case of employment reduction which in the first place, can be a straightforward result of poorly adapted people to modern workplace trends. Therefore
, in order to prevent confusion for the future generation, it could be helpful to implement some changes in higher education with additional lessons about future possible new specializations, in-demand skills, and other career advices
.
Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
Also
, there are already a bunch of disappearing workplaces leading to an increased level of unemployment. For this
scenario, encouraging authorities to create specialized organizations could be a principal solution. Thus
, people who were fired, due to
the reason of exceeding the number of professionals in areas where specialists' inquiry is diminishing, could have a chance to study new skills or taught
to implement their knowledge in in-demand areas. Add a missing verb
be taught
For example
, in America
there are 23 online platforms and organisations that teach highly-required freelancing skills in order to give a chance to unemployed people to make money.
In conclusion, in order to deal with the problem of nowadays unemployment rate Add a comma
America,
due to
hardships linked to poor adaptation in the modern workplace, the authorities could expand and make some changes in the educational system and fund certain organizations.Submitted by raxdiana4 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
Ensure a broader coverage of the topic by discussing more diverse aspects of the changing workplace and ways to prepare. This will help in fully responding to the task.
Coherence & Cohesion
Integrate examples more closely with your arguments to strengthen the coherence of your essay. Examples should directly support the main point of each paragraph.
Coherence & Cohesion
Further clarify your introduction by specifying which aspects of the workplace are changing and outline your essay's structure to guide the reader.
Coherence & Cohesion
To enhance cohesion, use a wider range of linking words and phrases that elucidate relationships between ideas, such as cause-effect or contrast.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!