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Nowadays most people read digital books than conventional books. Do you agree or disagree

#people #books
Over the years, technology has affected our way of life, even with the way we read materials. A great number of
people
 found reading digital
books
 more popular than hard copy
books
. To a certain extent, I do agree with the majority and will list
out
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 in
this
 essay. Conventional
books
 continue to stay favourable for the older age group as they may find it difficult to use a tablet or iPad and may not know how to purchase digital copies. Whereas the convenience of a digital book can be easily accessible on any mobile device.
For example
, students don't need to bring heavy paperback
books
 to school and can retrieve material anytime.
Moreover
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 since
people
 can purchase a softcopy on the internet,
this
also
 helps save space and storage.
Furthermore
, there is a huge variety of material which can be downloaded, even if the device was destroyed, all the material can be recovered.
This
 helps to preserve information as
people
 and upload their material. Another advantage is that the front can be adjusted for
people
 who have difficulties reading and does not require any lighting. In connection,
people
 do find it easier to read on a screen than on paper. In conclusion, I personally believe traditional paperback
books
 do offer benefits including a more tactile and traditional feel, eBooks provide a more convenient experience. With the ability to read hundreds of different
books
 at a time and ease of finding information, eBooks offer many benefits that traditional
books
 can not offer.
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