Some believe that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success while others believe that there are other factors to measure a country's success. What are these factors. Which factors do you consider the most.

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Nowadays, to make a country developed, it needs numerous kinds of innovations in
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of every field. Some historians believe that economic growth is the only way to calculate the nation's success. Whereas, others think that there are other factors
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provide other contributing measures with suitable examples ahead in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with, in the context of other components, it includes
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like education, which has become
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of our country after agriculture. To explicate,every individual should have good skills and for that ,they need
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quality of education .
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,it is the only way by which one can enhance their knowledge and can easily take some initiatives to do some
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for their nation.
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, water resources are playing a significant role
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of several dams.
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, without dams, we can not control the water flow of the rivers,
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rain occurs. Coming
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are some natural resources which provide electricity and some engineering and It sector , without them, we can not maintain our various departments like Railways, construction of bridges and the technical work etc.
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,imagine a scenario without the invention of railways, how much per cent economic growth, and enhancement in
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income you can imagine.
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, increase and decrease in production, consumption, demand, supply , inflation and deflation etc. these all are somewhere connected with our national income , gross domestic product , substitute items, and types of
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among various markets ,
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, perfect competition , monopolistic, monopoly etc, which paved the way to
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a country 's economy. To conclude,
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can not favour any sector, because both government as well corporate are somewhere contributing equally.
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, economic progress can not be done by one hand , both
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are necessary.
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