One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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traveller's
.
It is believed that the life of a Change the punctuation
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traveler
looks perfect. They can easily travel to see many wonderful places, Change the spelling
traveller
to
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apply
make
Correct your spelling
take
an
amazing photos, and have breakfast with a view of the Eiffel Tower. Everybody Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
know
only Change the verb form
knows
plus
side. So Correct article usage
the plus
lets
talk about Replace the word
let's
let us
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. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
difficulties
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a Change the verb form
being
traveler
is Change the spelling
traveller
a
complicated work. The first point is they are too rare Correct article usage
apply
see
their relatives. Add the particle
to see
even
if you have a trailer on wheels withCapitalize word
Even
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a
anyway
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apply
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homesick
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apply
travelers
doesn’t
have a life partner and children. The second point is they have to always move and every time they stop in an unknowing place, which Correct subject-verb agreement
don’t
even
sometimes can be perilous. For Rephrase
apply
exapmle
if your booking is canceled. Or you meet Correct your spelling
example
a strange neighbors
. Or you have been bitten by a dangerous insect. The third point is with time the magic of travelling Correct the article-noun agreement
strange neighbors
a strange neighbor
disapear
and Correct your spelling
disappears
travelers
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travellers
are becoming
bored. Some Wrong verb form
become
travelers
say that Change the spelling
travellers
eventually
you do not feel inspiration, curiosity or satisfaction. Add a comma
eventually,
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. And there are enough people who love to travel alone, who enjoy journeys without anybody. Change the spelling
travellers
Also
there are travellers who are satisfied with perilous journeys and risks. For Add a comma
Also,
them
it does not matter who are your neighbors. To summarise we can say that In spite of the above people keep becomingAdd a comma
them,
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travellers
travelers
. Even some of them prefer dangerous journeys. However
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite