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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? And it is positive or negative development?

#countries #people #hours #work #happen #development
Mostly
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 employees end up working overtime to complete their
role
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 and responsibilities. There are multiple reasons, which are responsible for
this
. In my opinion, it has various disadvantages from both employee and employer side.
To begin
 with, today we are living in a very competitive and fast-paced world. Where to fill out a position, there are many potential candidates available in
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 market. In an effort to work well and
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 the workflow, workers end up working for extra hours, other than their normal scheduled hours.
Moreover
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 working concept in IT sector, education system and at various other places, where work from home is possible, has brought
this
 concept of long working hours and even working on weekends and national holidays as well.
Furthermore
, sometimes
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 may face health issues due to working
long
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 time on
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 basis.
On the other hand
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the employer
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employer
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 have to pay extra for overtime. The staff with great potential and dedication tend to switch their jobs very rapidly. Again, management has to give financial
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 to their staff in order to retain them in an organization. To conclude
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, it is more harmful
for
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 the employees, as they cannot live a balanced life. They get cut off from their own family, socially isolated and medically unfit. In long
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 an organization can only grow when
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 workers are happy, satisfied and living a balanced personal and professional life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevalent
  • economic pressures
  • financial stability
  • competitive job markets
  • corporate cultures
  • stigma
  • demonstrate dedication
  • advent of technology
  • blurred the lines
  • accelerated career progression
  • dedicated employee
  • significant negative implications
  • stress levels
  • mental health
  • physical health
  • social and family time
  • productivity
  • burnout
  • flexible working hours
  • work-life balance
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