You have recently finished a course and would like to give some feedback to the course organiser. Write a letter to the college where you took the course. In your letter explain what the course was say what you enjoyed about the course suggest how the course could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, I recently pursued a diploma from your institution and would like to share my experience. I appreciate the entire team of your organisation to support us throughout the journey. I had taken up an executive course on “Advance- Learning & Development Strategies”. It was a blend of digital and classroom training for the
last
eight months. I was elated to learn the new concepts which were taught with the help of business
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.
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, the add-on sessions of using a few emerging
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such
as VR & AI
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the learning development
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captivating.
Lastly
, I admired the professors who walked
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extra mile to share their
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with some practical insights.
Although
the course was engaging, it will be fruitful to get an opportunity to work on a few industry projects to implement the learnt strategies. Hope my feedback helps the academy
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future courses. Yours faithfully, Devika
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