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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, many
countries
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 are increasing significantly in development and progression in many aspects. Some governments think that economics plays a vital of the progression of
countries
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, while many
people
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 believe that other types of development are
also
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 equally important. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, many governments think economics is the key
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success of progress in their
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. It is true to say that economics is one of the most important aspects in many
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, there are many
countries
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 like the USA, Singapore and Russia, which all of these
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 are leaders in world markets.
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, They can control the price of products,
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 as fuels and grains.
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, these
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 are acceptable in many
countries
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.
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, Some
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 think governments should encourage other types of development too,
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 as technology , science and public services. nowadays, it is undeniable that there are many problems in public services.
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, in Thailand, there is a problem with
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transport
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 like buses, for buses in Thailand is a lack
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hygiene very much and very crowded with
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 who use
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 transport.
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, if the government can encourage
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 to use public
transports
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, the
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 is
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 able to
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 up in the economy too. To conclude, in my opinion, the economy is important in progress for a
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, but the government should
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 encourage and support other progressions too.
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, the
country
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 can be successful, if
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governments
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governments
 only fund and support
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a type of progression
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