Childhood obesity is becoming a problem thoughout the developed world . Because of this , some people think that adverts for fast food , sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

Some people state that

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for fast

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,

sweets

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and sugary snacks should be banned in

schools

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and colleges, because of the increased level of childhood obesity worldwide. As far as I am concerned, due to today's

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inappropriate

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inappropriate

unhealthy

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adverts

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,

children

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are less encouraged to have a healthy

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.

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, regarding

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's health,

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should do their best in order to point out the importance of having a balanced

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.

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, colleges can publish sports

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in order to trigger pupils' interest in physical exercise.

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,

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can introduce healthy treats to support

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to choose a balanced

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.

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,

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have to change students' perception of high cholesterol

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by replacing the fast-

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with healthy ones. That's how they will manage to encourage

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to do more physical exercise and eat low-fat

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.

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, teachers have to make sure that pupils are aware of the damage that may be caused by

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and fast

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in their bodies and try to persuade them to change their

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.

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, physical exercise is vital for students' development, because it keeps them fit.

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, a high school in the USA implemented a system which did not allow sugary snack

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to be published. Surprisingly, teachers noticed

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positive progress in

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's behaviour, because they ate way fewer

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during breaks.

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, replacing the

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with positive ones is not enough to persuade students to give up on their bad eating habits. Clearly, colleges can introduce fruits as treats to offer pupils a healthy alternative to sugary snacks.

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,

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can organise courses whose aim is to present to

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the upsides of having a balanced alimentation, based on sport and

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rich in vitamins.

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, a study shows that

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's attitude about fast

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and

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changed the moment they realised the amount of benefits fruits and vegetables have and started to give up on fast

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. In summary,

schools

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should normalise good eating habits by not publishing unhealthy

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.

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way they will change

children

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's attitudes about the bad effects that fast and sugary

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has.