In some country, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

It is significant for

people

to have

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ownership of a

home

in some nations. Some

people

support that owning a

home

is a symbol of family, whereas others argue that

this

is not really necessary. In

this

essay, I will briefly explain some reasons and give my own opinion. For some

people

who seem

having

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their own houses is

a

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essential matter, there are several factors.

First

of all, in some culture, they think having

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stable living

places

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represent a solid foundation of

family

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.

For example

, in Chinese culture, males need to

owning

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a

home

before they get

marry

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. If men do not

having

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their own houses, some Chinese elders may refuse the marriage.

Second

, renting a

home

from others is unstable. Due to the rent contract,

people

may not decide

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decoration and some

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furniture

furnitures

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of their

home

by themselves.

Moreover

, if the renter

cancel

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the contract dishonestly,

people

will need to find

other place

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On the other hand

, buying a house is not simple in

this

recent

year

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. With the critical inflation, the price of houses

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in some particular

area

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might be very expensive.

For instance

, the research has said that the fresh

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graduates

graduate

graduatees

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graduate

students in Taiwan need to work for about 20 years without eating any food to afford a flat in Taipei. Compared to the past, the budget of living nowadays is not as affordable as about 20 years ago.

As a result

, owning a

home

for

young

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generation may be too stressful. To sum up, it seems that there have both some benefits and drawbacks

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this

statement.

However

, I think there

are

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more negative

situation

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.

Although

some

people

think that it is momentous, I will say it is

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quite old fashion thought. Comprehending the situation now, the surrounding

is not allow

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everyone to own a

home

.

Consequently

, in order to not to put more pressure on young

people

, some

people

need to change their

mind

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immediately.