Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view.

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It is often argued that overseas
tourists
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should be charged more to visit historical buildings than the indigenous communities. I completely disagree with
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view because everyone has equal
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to see
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and they have come from a far place and already spent a heavy
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in travelling.
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, historical
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sites are not personal properties so everyone has equal
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on
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it
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. These are the assets of mankind. No single government or nation can categorically say they have a complete right
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it. If the local people pay less as
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entry
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price
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,
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is complete an unfair
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due to the fact that travellers from all over the world have
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rights
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like
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them. To illustrate, the 36 storied- building, Cocoa house was constructed by the profit generated by Nigerian farmers and it has
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a major
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tourists
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attraction
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6decades ago,
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however
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ticket
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is
same
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the same
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for both the
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locals
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and foreigners.
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, due to human
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rights
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there should be
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the same
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entry
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prices for these.
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, travellers come from a different
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countries
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and spend an enormous
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to reach these places. They pay a huge
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to take flights and cabs.
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, they spend a substantial
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for
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accommodation too. If again a more
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is asked for
entry
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to these places,
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is not justified. The role of the government is to incentivise
tourists
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to travel again but not to demotivate them. A double or more
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than local residents is
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of discouragement.
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recent research reveals that international visitors do not prefer those places which charge
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entry
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prices from foreigners.
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, they already had paid huge charges to
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reach their destination, in view of
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,
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price
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will motivate them to visit again. In conclusion, asking
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more
price
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from
tourists
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from different regions is not a conducive decision because they already paid huge expenses and it is the right of everyone to gain access to these buildings.

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