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Is freedom to speak is necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer

#freedom #society
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It is true that most modern societies are demanding more freely speeches without boundaries or hinders to expressing their needs. From my personal perspective, I agree with
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, and in the lines below I will explain the reasons for my position. The
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 reason why I agree with the importance of
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 in speaking is that it is bold evidence of civilized communities.
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 will lead to mutual respect among the society members and keep facts clear without polishing or changing. Adopting
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 behaviour,
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, can lead to stability and raising of awareness among citizens. Another reason for my view is that granting
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 of opinion will ensure conveying the correct message to other parties. Eventually,
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 will lead to a more open-thinking community.
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, peaceful protests to change a certain law or constitution are not allowed in most nations except in developed countries where
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 is a right for all individuals. To conclude, there are many justifications why speaking with no fears has become crucial in recent days. It is the easiest and fastest way to convey a clear opinion,
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, it is a sign of an open-minded community.
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, it is recommended that we do not use
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 to hurt others or cross our limits with them.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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