Write a letter to the manager of a prestigious, successful company, inviting them to consider your resumé and thus your employment.

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Dear Sir Ahmadi I am Shaghayegh Shadman, one of the applicants for filling your company vacancy in designing field. I am writing
this
letter in order to ask you kindly to assess my CV which is attached to
this
e-mail. I have put together all my diplomas, qualifications, job experiences and academic degrees which I obtained during these years in my CV.
Although
I submitted my application two weeks ago, I have not received any invitation for an interview. In my perspective, I fit accurately the job description and I am a proper candidate for
such
position
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as I have a tendency to be an integral part of a team, I am capable of mastering new skills and have a strong sense of responsibility who can take on daunting duties. I assure you, that I can be an indicator for experiencing
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growth in your sales figures and seeing considerable a rise in your annual turnover; my technical pieces of information will be a helpful point for winning the stiff competition which you will be put in the next month
due to
the fact that I had a high-power job in your rival company. I am keenly looking forward to attending and
presening
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my references; should any questions arise, make sure to contact me. Respectfully, Shaghayegh Shdman
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grammar
Ensure the use of correct titles and spellings, such as ensuring 'Shaghayegh Shdman' is spelled 'Shaghayegh Shadman' consistently.
content
Include a brief mention of any specific skills or projects that align closely with the company's ongoing initiatives.
structure
The letter is well-structured, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
tone
The tone is professional and suitable for the context.
content
The letter covers all necessary points such as qualifications, skills, and interest in the position.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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