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Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

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Dear Mr Smith, I am Patricia Roberts, I was your student since I was 8 years old. I am writing
this
 letter to let you know that I am extremely grateful for what you have done for
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student
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 like me, from
the
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 person who can not read any English letters or words to be me on
this
 day. You taught me how properly take responsibilities and pay attention in classes.
Moreover
, you taught me how to open numerous doors of possibilities and took me out of my comfort zone to see
this
 infinite world.
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, since I was in high school I had missed the exchange program in France due to I was afraid of what going to happen in the future and it made me
came
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 across the wall of comfort I built.
However
, I am not that person anymore, I have been to the USA alone with brave and
proud
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. I
am
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really appreciated that and now it is time for you to relax and rest with your family and enjoy your
favorite
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 staff
such
 as singing and training
dog
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. Yours sincerely, Patricia Roberts
Submitted by patty cool on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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