Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some critics state that the crucial

environment

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environmental

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issue in recent

year

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is special

species

of planet and animals going to disappear, while others believe that there are major problems that should be addressed. In my

opinion

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global warming and air pollution are more urgent.

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one

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hand, in some

group

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of

people

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opinion

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including me there are many critical environmental

problem

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that

have

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effect

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on our lives. I think global warming is a pressing environmental issue that we are facing nowadays. The main reason behind

this

problem

is

ever-growing

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amount of carbon dioxide

that is

emitted into

air

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the air

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every day. Different human-related factors,

such

as factories and automobiles, contribute to

this

problem

by burning fossil fuels. As a consequence, the world is getting

more warm

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at an alarming rate and

therefore

,

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affecting

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effecting

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affecting

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every country. We must act immediately if we do not want to cause

insoluble

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environment

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environmental

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problem

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problems

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.

On the other hand

, some people believe that many

species

of animals and

plant

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plants

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are on the verge of extinction. Government should allocate enough budget to build wildlife reserves, and

to

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apply

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enforce new laws to prosecute poachers. I truly believe that with regard global weather temperature can protect many

species

. Climate changes

causes

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Intense, searing heat, and

comes

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across with ice melting

as a result

, the levels of the oceans are rising steadily every year and

destroys

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animals

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animals'

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territories

thus

, many

species

are

disappeared

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. Changing in

weather

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pattern is surely

significant

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factor that

exacerbate

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the endangered

species

situation. In conclusion, while it is apparent that the loss of particular kinds of flora and fauna is one of the main ecological issues, it is undeniable that climate change is above all.