We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
It has long been my belief that nowadays
computers
have become one of the most important things in many Use synonyms
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improvement as well as the disadvantages at the same time. More fraud comes to hacking the data based on Linking Words
computers
that are hidden in some files containing a virus.
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To begin
with, the benefits from the increase in users of Linking Words
computers
impact how Use synonyms
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behave in daily life. To illustrate, it seems many citizens can do thinks of easier ways to book something through the internet and online market, like buying food, ordering some services, and buying a ticket flight. Use synonyms
As a result
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invention can be used in future for many things in order to make many populations have a good life with few tasks. Especially, for those who work through online computes build upon business sectors in order to make the company developed.
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However
, It is believed that the simplicity caused by Linking Words
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improvement, can make many residents feel bored easily and depend on the computer’s progress rather than human progress. Many societies should be more suspicious of these benefits. Take an example the cases the crime on the internet Linking Words
such
as credit card fraud, coding, hacking and carding can make Linking Words
computers
at risk in many Use synonyms
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's daily activities. In comparison, it seems to me that government should have the determination to limit the usage of Use synonyms
computers
based on citizens’ ages.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the benefit from Use synonyms
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improvement should be able to make many Linking Words
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can observe and understand how Use synonyms
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and societies behaved and as tools to make communication much simpler in recent times.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite