IELTS 8 - Exam 1 - Writing Task 2 Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Absolutely, the new generation will become the main hope to drive the future world. In order to create the ideal society, nowadays

children

should be properly taught to become smart citizens in the future. Some people allege that teaching

kids

are the responsibility of

parents

, while

others

argue that schools play a more important role in educating

students

. In

this

essay, both viewpoints will be elaborated on before my opinion is shown. On the one hand,

parents

act as role models to pupils as at young stages,

children

have the ability to imitate the ambient person to survive.

Therefore

, the behaviour of

kids

is always similar to their father and mother.

For example

, I decided to work as a government officer as my father and mother are civil servants, and I follow their way.

Moreover

, the proportion of offspring and teachers in school leads to ineffective concentration of their

students

. To illustrate, in an ordinary institute one teacher has to take care of approximately 50

kids

.

As a result

, some

students

do not receive proper treatment as there are so many

kids

.

On the other hand

, offspring can drastically learn how to live with

others

in school under the supervision of teachers. As every kid in class come from different families and backgrounds, they have different attitudes and behaviours, which are similar to living in the real world.

For instance

,

children

can learn how to share their stuff with their friends, can learn how to communicate with

others

, and can learn how to socialize with

others

.

Furthermore

, schools can implement the rule and regulations to form the discipline as well as punishment for the

students

who violate the rule.

Consequently

, young learn how to obey the rule and become good members of the community in the future. In conclusion,

although

both

parents

and schools play a significant role in teaching offsprings, presumably,

children

's attitude is more significantly influenced by

parents

, as they act as being an idol, and spend the most time with

kids