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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Mr or Mrs, I am writing to you in order to express my opinion about the most memorable text in my life. First of all,
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 book is called "Can't Hurt Me" and it is a biographical one. It tells us about David Goggins who once decided to change his life drastically. Starting from his father's abusive approach to his own weight.
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 I was reading
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 masterpiece I understood that there is nothing in the world that people are not able to do. If we sincerely want something, we will get it in any way possible. I learned that sometimes
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 when no other option exists, you just have to overstep your prejudices and do what you can. Heartbreaking and at the same time motivating edition that had a significant influence on me. And I am sure that everyone should read it. No one will be without any emotions. All my friends whom I recommended to read biographical stories claim that they changed their minds about obstacles in their lives.
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 essay to everyone so that they can enjoy, evolve and become stronger in any period of life.

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Greeting and Closing
Try to use a more direct and personal greeting, such as addressing the editor by name if known, to strengthen the personal touch of your letter.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Consider dividing your ideas into clear, separate paragraphs for better readability and structure. Each main idea or argument should have its own paragraph.
Task Achievement
Your letter would benefit from a more detailed description of how the book influenced you on a personal level, providing specific examples or changes in your behavior or mindset.
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain a balance between sharing personal insights and making general statements to keep the focus on how the book influenced you specifically.
Task Achievement
You effectively conveyed your enthusiasm for the book and its impact, which engages the reader's interest.
Task Achievement
You succeeded in recommending the book to others by sharing its universal appeal, which addresses the final part of the prompt effectively.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • influential
  • perspective
  • transformative
  • introspection
  • universal
  • timeless
  • contemporary
  • resonate
  • inspiration
  • genre
  • anecdote
  • relevance
  • beliefs
  • motivations
  • significance
  • courteous
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