A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work.you would like to do some voluntaryl unpaid work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntaryl unpaid work. in your letter explain why you want to do voluntaryl unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be usful give detail of when you would be available for work

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Dear sir or madam, I hope

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letter finds you well.I am writing

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letter to say why I want to volunteer for

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, I want to say I have been working in the museum for 2 years when I was youngest and I am extremely happy when I can help other people ,especially in the museum because I fully enjoy historically and I can learn any more very soon, for

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reason, it my favourite job and I should say It has been important if I cannot make money. After ,that I am going to discuss my ability and I have good experience in

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job in the past and

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I can speak 3 languages and I believe

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subject help me when you have foreign tourists.

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, I am not really busy so I can spend a lot of time in the museum and

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my home is entirely nearby here so lots of time I am available for work. Looking forward to receiving your reply. Yours Faithfully, Saeed Foroughi nia

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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190 words

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