Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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countryside
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the countryside
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such
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educational environment, a better Correct article usage
a better
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facilities
. The forthcoming paragraphs will demonstrate how mentioned facts would create urban areas a better place to settle.
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Firstly
, living in a Linking Words
city
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citizens
with more and better educational Use synonyms
centers
and universities. In fact, governments have to build more educational Change the spelling
centres
facilities
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city
due to its large number of Use synonyms
citizens
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people
have many choices with a wide range of offered Use synonyms
facilities
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centres
a
high-quality instruction to their students. Remove the article
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centers
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people
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Secondly
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cities
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job
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people
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also
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to find their dream Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
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people
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have
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city
due to not finding a proper Use synonyms
job
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people
who live in big Use synonyms
cities
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job
market. To summarize, big Use synonyms
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condition
to start a career path which is intriguing for ambitious candidates.
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a more
environment
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environments
cities
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apply
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countryside
due to its silence and less Add an article
the countryside
crowd
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people
regardless of Use synonyms
the
age. As an example, many Correct article usage
apply
people
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the countryside
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festivals
Consequently
, living in a Linking Words
city
would provide Use synonyms
citizens
to have the opportunity of gathering and having fun together.
To summarize, in some countries, moving to Use synonyms
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countryside
is inevitable due to Add an article
the countryside
rapid
increase Correct article usage
the rapid
of
the population. Some might believe that
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in
city
has definitely significant opportunities and Use synonyms
facilities
that would provide Use synonyms
citizens
with Use synonyms
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better education, career and entertainment in their lives. Some Remove the article
apply
people
might suppose that living in Use synonyms
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the
countryside
might be beneficial; Use synonyms
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opportunity
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opportunities
better
future for their Correct article usage
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citizens
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