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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, the number of people who works
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online
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 on student's learning process as well since studying at home is becoming popular. I absolutely believe that
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 is a negative development.
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 level of
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 information or not from their emotions. For
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, the
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 showed that pupils who studied online during a pandemic passed dreadfully the exam which is
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 to enter university.
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 affirms the importance of a traditional method of studying. Except for decreasing knowledge, online learning
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 not provide students with
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 to develop communication skills. As children study on
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 own at home, there is no chance to make
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 with others especially when a school is the best place for children to develop their soft skills.
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 students who were interviewed in
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 school in Astana said that after covid-19 it was difficult for them to talk with other people,
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 a bit shy and uncomfortable. Distance
education
 restricts children's ability to speak with other people. To sum up, even though more and more schools are switching to the online type of
education
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • e-learning
  • accessibility
  • inclusive
  • productivity
  • personalized learning
  • disciplined routine
  • interpersonal skills
  • cybersecurity
  • sustainability
  • work-life balance
  • physical disabilities
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