he number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph compares the

number

of

visitors

to a certain Caribbean

island

for a 7-year period from 2010. Overall, it is apparent that the total

number

of tourists visiting the

island

increased over the years.

Also

, the

number

of

visitors

staying on the

island

remained higher than the ones staying on the cruise ships for most of the duration except near the final years

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the latter outnumbered the former. It can be seen that the total

number

of

visitors

initially

was exactly 1

million

in 2010, increased exponentially for the

next

2 years,

then

rose gradually till 2015 to reach almost 2.7

million

and remained flat for a year.

This

number

finally

jumped dramatically to hit a peak of 3.5

million

in 2017. The

visitors

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on the

island

and cruise ships were nearly 0.7 and 0.3

million

respectively in 2010.

Afterward

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,

visitors

on the

island

gradually increased till 2013 to reach a high of 1.5

million

and remained stable till 2017 with a small dip in 2016. Cruise ships

on the other hand

, with mild fluctuations, kept increasing till mid-2015 to surpass the numbers

on

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island

visitors

to hit a peak of 2

million

in 2017.