Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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As solid waste has become a crucial problem in society, some
people
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argue that citizens are not paying attention to
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the waste at
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.
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, they claim that setting a legal requirement by the government is the only way to increase
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. As far as I am concerned, I agree with
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a small extent as education may be a better way
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solving the issue.
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with,
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requirement
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may raise
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’s awareness of recycling.
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, the government can set a limited weight of
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for each household
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,
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fee will be needed if the waste is overweight. By making recycling
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a legal requirement, the deterred effect may encourage citizens to think twice before they throw away
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,
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may try to produce less or recycle their wastes in order to prevent punishments.
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, educating the public may be more beneficial to increase recycling at home. As
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may not know the undesirable effect on
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by wasting and the importance of recycling, teaching them the knowledge may solve the root of the problem.
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, society can organize talks or movies on
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and explain the benefit.
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, it is possible for
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to care more about the environment and
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learn to recycle. In conclusion,
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the deterrent effect may increase
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, punishments may not be strong enough to prevent
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from wasting resources.
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, education may encourage the public to give more concerned
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environment
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as well as start to recycle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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