The use of social media is replacing face to face interection among many people in society do you think that advantage outweigh the disadvantage

Nowadays, social
media
is become
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a major part of
people
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people's
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life, and it
push
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pushes
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people
away from each other. Normally,
people
will get to socialize
by
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apply
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face
to
face
. But these days,
people
are typing on the
phone
more than talking to
the
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real person.
this
statement will clarify the
the
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fact that most
people
are get
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are getting
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into social
media
more than
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interact
interest
interect
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interact
face
to
face
.
First
of all,
people
that addicted to the device,
they
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will spend their time on their
phone
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phones
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.
Furthermore
, it will be hard for them to fit in the society than other
people
.
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example
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when we go to the restaurants, we will see the table that has many
people
on, but they do not communicate with each other. They decided to scroll their
phone
up and down.
However
, social
media
is not a good thing when
people
give too much attention
in
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it.
Furthermore
, technology
give
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gives
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people
more
oppotunity
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opportunity
to communicate with
people
around the world.
This
make
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makes
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people
do
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not want to socialize with
people
that there
are
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is
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face
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faced
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with.
For example
,
people
are
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like to download an app that allows
you
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them
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to communicate with other
people
because it is more
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and challenging.
Although
, some
people
take it
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seriously
seriousely
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seriously
and sometimes it
bring
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brings
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them in a sexual
ways
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way
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. In conclusion, I totally believe that social
media
is replacing
face to
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face-to-face
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face
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interaction
interection
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interaction
from a lot of
people
in the community, due to the fact that wherever we go, we will get to see
people
holding their
device
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devices
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while walking or eating, other than
pay
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paying
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attention to
people
besides
them. I hope
this
statement will get to help
people
from the
phone
to take care
and
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of and
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interact
interest
interect
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interact
with
people
in the society
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