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The NRA believe more guns make the country safer. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

#nra #guns #country
It is often argued that more
weapon
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 make
country
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the country
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 safer. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement and think that
guns
 make
country
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the country
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 more dangerous.
First
 of all, I reckon that the impact of
guns
 is huge, school
shooting
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 and terror acts happen in the countries
such
 as
Usa
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USA
 very often
,
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 because the
weapons
 can be purchased by 18 years old individuals.
This
 could be prevented by
government
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,
nonetheless
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 constitution of the
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USA
Usa
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US
 allows people to buy
weapons
.
Moreover
,
guns
 and knives are available almost in every town in the United States of America.
For instance
, the situation in
recent
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a recent
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 primary school shooting that has happened in Texas, 20 people have been killed by
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individual
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individuals
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 with mental and psychopathic problems,
hence
 18 children under the age of 14
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been
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 killed.
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 why it is very dangerous and silly to think that
guns
 make
country
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the country
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 safer.
Secondly
, an excess of
weapons
 may provide opportunities for felons and criminals to buy
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the big
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 and cheap
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 of arsenal.
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, they will be
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 like
a
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police or army
that
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 may cause
a
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big trouble and consequences for society.
Subsequently
,
country
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the country
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 by trying to
safe
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 itself, make an
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 to destroy itself.
For example
, the situation that
has
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happened in January in Kazakhstan demonstrated that felons and terrorists can cause
a
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big trouble to
government
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the government
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 by stealing
guns
 from gunshops and
weaponmarkets
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weapon markets
weapons markets
.
Thus
, even if governments around the world will produce
weapons
,
it
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 need to be in
usage
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 of
regular
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 army or police not in
people
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 use. To sum up, I strongly
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 that more
guns
 make
country
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the country
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 not a safe place,
in
contrast
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,contrast
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 it provides with
weapons
 felons and terrorists and because of
this
 school shootings and terrors happen in the world.
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