Some people feel that boarding schools whoare an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some parent
also
wants to give their son or a daughter studies at a high-quality
school
as enough confidence to send a
child
to the prestigious education
system
. Others
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that the boarding
school
is the best choice for
student
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.
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the other hand, some people deny that suggestion for different prejudices.
This
statement will discuss to be clearly known. A boarding educational
system
is a special type of
school
. Apart from students study in there, they can enjoy meals and live within 5-7 days at
school
.
Such
a quality
system
achieves the supporters as a parent who wants to take their
child
to
school
with a blossom can improve
child
's behaviours,
also
have a better studying environment through an amount of time because they study at night on a class
instead
go home in the afternoon.
For example
, when pupils live at the boarding
school
, they are applied by many methods that can equip them
good
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knowledge and general skills
such
as waking up a punctual or having a much time to talk with friends and create a better community to be protected from the influence of negative society outside the
school
.
However
, some parents are not approved of
this
way and argue that a
child
will be endured
by
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many tremendous problems inside the boarding
system
.
For example
, many situations
such
as violence at
school
or the pressure of studying can potentially predispose to any suicides, all of which have happened annually that the government has published to confine the negative problems can contact the pupil.
Therefore
, students are inevitable on the bad side when they live at the institution for 5-7 consecutive days and do not go home. Probably
this
way makes parents have
to
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against about give them to the boarding
school
. In the nutshell,
the
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boarding schools exist
a
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pros and cons. In my opinion, it may
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better way if children at home and enjoy their time under the supervisor after
school
. From that, parents can comfortable and not worry about their
child
can not be disturbed by negative problems
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