Some people feel that boarding schools whoare an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, some parent
also
wants to give their son or a daughter studies at a high-quality school
as enough confidence to send a child
to the prestigious education system
. Others supposes
that the boarding Change the verb form
suppose
school
is the best choice for student
. Fix the agreement mistake
students
In
the other hand, some people deny that suggestion for different prejudices. Change preposition
On
This
statement will discuss to be clearly known.
A boarding educational system
is a special type of school
. Apart from students study in there, they can enjoy meals and live within 5-7 days at school
. Such
a quality system
achieves the supporters as a parent who wants to take their child
to school
with a blossom can improve child
's behaviours, also
have a better studying environment through an amount of time because they study at night on a class instead
go home in the afternoon. For example
, when pupils live at the boarding school
, they are applied by many methods that can equip them good
knowledge and general skills Change preposition
with good
such
as waking up a punctual or having a much time to talk with friends and create a better community to be protected from the influence of negative society outside the school
.
However
, some parents are not approved of this
way and argue that a child
will be endured by
many tremendous problems inside the boarding Change preposition
apply
system
. For example
, many situations such
as violence at school
or the pressure of studying can potentially predispose to any suicides, all of which have happened annually that the government has published to confine the negative problems can contact the pupil. Therefore
, students are inevitable on the bad side when they live at the institution for 5-7 consecutive days and do not go home. Probably this
way makes parents have to
against about give them to the boarding Change preposition
apply
school
.
In the nutshell, the
boarding schools exist Correct article usage
apply
a
pros and cons. In my opinion, it mayCorrect the article-noun agreement
apply
a
better way if children at home and enjoy their time under the supervisor after Add a missing verb
be a
school
. From that, parents can comfortable and not worry about their child
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