When designing building, the intended use of the building should be taken in into account as important rather than the outward appearance? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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world, some people assert that
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exterior
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view
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is essential, whereas some prefer its user-friendliness. In my opinion, I consider that the
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intentional
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is as vital for the
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as the outside appearance to provide them
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experience. On the one hand, where we have different types of buildings around us, caters to different needs of the customers.
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, the inside design is sketched keeping in mind the end-user. The drawing depends on the facilities the
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will want to cater
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of structures around us. If the needs of the clients are not taken into consideration
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the main idea fails.
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, the number of rooms,
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of washrooms will vary in all of the above types.
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,we have structures
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as
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places, Film cities, whose illustrious civil engineering attracts viewers.
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because
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because
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structures want to keep the eyes glued to the beautiful design thereby generating more income and increased footfalls.
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, the famous leaning tower Pisa, Ramoji Film city, Film sets to be used as backdrops for movies are built
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entrtaining
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entertaining
the audience and amuse them with the experience.
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, in my view the motive with which the
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skyscraper
is built matters a lot. If the design is built for residence,
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it should be able to
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amenities. And if for
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the audience
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such
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expereince
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experience
should be!
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, the world's tallest Burj Khalifa incorporates both the parameters of living and tourism.
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, inside and outside
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matters
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a lot
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it. In conclusion, the kind of experience the seller wants to provide to its building user will determine the emphasis on
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interior and exterior.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • intended use
  • functionality
  • efficiency
  • occupants
  • outward appearance
  • subjective
  • aesthetic appeal
  • well-designed
  • balancing
  • successful design
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