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Nowadays countries are reducing the cost of air travel as compared to the past. While some argue this will result in a negative outcome, others believe it will be positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Use relevant examples.

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Humans are transforming themselves through
technology
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Technology
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 significantly impacts many aspects of life, whether in education,
work
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, interest, or the manufacture of
robots
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 or making a modern car. The
auto
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 and robotics industries are the two advantages of automation worldwide. The
auto
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 industry is the
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 advantage of
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 industry saved people time and effort without getting tired, because they can go anywhere they want. To illustrate, a company in California has made an advanced car called tesla.
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 is a very modern car that can drive without a driver and avoid all the dangers in front of it.
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, all over the world, people depend on cars to go to
work
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 or wherever they want within the borders of their country.
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, we can use cars to
work
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 and trade goods and earn money from them,
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, we can
work
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 as taxi drivers and we can distribute goods to stores. To sum up, the automobile industry has helped the world navigate and earn money. The robotics industries are two advantages of
technology
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 these days are used in restaurants to serve food to guests.
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, there are a lot of restaurants in turkey that use it. some people like
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 way and some individuals don't like it.
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,
robots
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 are used in medicine where they can help doctors transport materials, to illustrate there
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 a lot of hospitals
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 on
robots
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 in surgery. In the end,
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 are playing the role of humans these days. In conclusion, the two advantages of automation worldwide are the
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 and robotics industries.
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 if
technology
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 did not come our lives would be difficult, so, in my opinion, I know the
technology
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 has a disadvantage but its advantage changes our world.

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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