Some expert believe that it is a better for children to begin learning of foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this out weigh the disadvantages.

There has been a controversy about whether
children
should learn a foreign
language
at a young
age
. I think it has some merits and demerits, but the advantages still outweigh its disadvantages. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost. It's easier to learn and to be proficient at a young
age
. Our mother
language
system won't be formed when we are young, and kids tend to have a better memory than adults;
therefore
, when kids study a foreign
language
at a very young
age
,
such
as at the primary school, it will be more effective than studying at secondary school. Should they begin learning a foreign
language
at secondary school, their mother tone system can adversely influence the learning progress to a large extent,
such
as the pronunciation, and the
language
logic. It's worth mentioning that the earlier you begin learning a foreign
language
, the more vocabulary you can have. As we know, learning vocabulary requires time;
hence
, were you to learn the
language
quite young, you would have more time to memorize more vocabulary.
Second
,
children
will have fewer psychological barriers. It's common that whenever we speak a foreign
language
, we worry about if the grammar is correct or do the words we use can really express the meaning.
As a result
, we might become scared of speaking a foreign
language
.
On the contrary
,
children
won't have
this
concern, not only because their
language
system is still not developed yet, but
also
because kids tend to have fewer psychological burdens. At
this
point, should
children
start learning a new
language
quite young, they don't feel shy when they speak it.
On the other hand
, learning a new
language
at a young
age
has demerits too.
For example
, it brings about a lack of a sense of cultural belonging. Take me as an example. I started learning English around 8 years old, and I have been using it for almost half of my life. As a consequence, I know more about Western culture than Chinese culture, and I'm quite confused about which side is genuinely my home now. In conclusion, I think the advantages outstrip its disadvantages.
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