Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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technological advancements. As long as some argued that advent of the technology has

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made many choices

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the communities. In

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becoming closer to each other because of

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technological revolution.

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through computer-based science relative to their own desires and satisfaction.

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many apps where we can buy any products with our interest from local as well as international countries,

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as eBay, Amazon, Alibaba and so on.

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, when they have

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too many choices

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things and

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choosy.

Additionally

, whenever students

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have various access to learn studies and they have attempted to get what are the best and useful learning materials for their daily routines.

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, a child who was able to do

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had strived to get knowledge through

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of learning tools

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YouTube and Facebook videos.

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productive and more essential websites among other several tools. In conclusion, in my perspective, I completely agree that

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as long as we have a great opportunity ensure our

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a better

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a positive manner.

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