Some people say that ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

The chart illustrates the proportion of
first
-year
teachers
who have usual teaching
jobs
after graduation in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. According to the data,
teachers
teaching French-language decreased dramatically in the percentage of having
jobs
during the time. While 70% of
English
teachers
had
jobs
in 2001,
however
,
this
figure
fell by approximately 20% in the
next
year. Plus, the
figure
had risen slowly in the
next
5 years. The largest percentage of
this
figure
is in 2007 when there was a peak at 75%.
On the other hand
, the trend of French-language
teachers
having
jobs
is the opposite. The
figure
had decreased enormously between 2001 and 2003.
Besides
that in 2001,
English
and French
teachers
were approximately the same as each other. The
figure
had risen slightly by 5% between 2003 and 2005 and
then
surprisingly fell to below 30%. Overall, nobody can deny that the percentage of
first
-year
English
teachers
having
jobs
has increased since
English
has become a popular language in the world while the trend of French
teachers
is
in contrast
.
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