The local Council in your city has no funds for repairs and maintanenance of old buildings. It has decided to demolish a historical building to build a software company. Write a letter to the head of Council. In your letter: explain why the building is important suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community *suggest a solution to finance the repairs.

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letter in connection with the historical building which is planned to demolish to set up a software company.

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building has had its significance over the past decades because it belongs to a famous emperor who was born here. It is a valuable monument as it attracts myriad tourists from other parts of the country,

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, which makes

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city popular so

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is an important one. It can be used in various ways.

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, authorities can convert a part of it into a library which will impart knowledge to various generations.

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, another part can be used to organize fares as it is a spacious place.

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, It should not be demolished to build a software company rather governments need to ask for donations and charity in order to repair and maintain it. It would be really commendable if you could restrain the construction of the software firm and make arrangements for its repair. I hope you will take corrective measures in

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matter. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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