You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Sir, Hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I am Navneet Kaur, sales department head. I am writing

this

letter to request some

time

off from my work schedule. Unfortunately, my mother has been sick since

last

month and was admitted to the hospital the previous week.

Thus

, I need to travel to another province and spend

time

with her to render her proper care so, that she should get healthy as soon as possible. After consulting her doctor, he suggested that she

requires

Correct subject-verb agreement

require

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care

along with

a proper diet and exercise plan for one month to recover properly.

Therefore

, I need 45 days leave to spend

time

with her for recovery and spend some quality

time

with her.

Initially

, some of my meetings are going to be attended by my junior Adam who is the assistant manager of my department. I am going to manage some relentless meetings online as well.

However

, as I will be away, I promise you I will work on weekends as well after my return to manage and arrange the previous tasks properly. I hope you understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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task achievement

Ensure that the explanation for taking time off is concise and directly to the point to maintain clarity.

coherence cohesion

Break down lengthy paragraphs to contain single ideas to enhance readability.

task achievement

The letter maintains a formal and respectful tone throughout, suitable for a workplace setting.

coherence cohesion

There is a clear structure to the letter with an introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

191 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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