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You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Sir, Hope
this
 letter finds you in good health. I am Navneet Kaur, sales department head. I am writing
this
 letter to request some
time
 off from my work schedule. Unfortunately, my mother has been sick since
last
 month and was admitted to the hospital the previous week.
Thus
, I need to travel to another province and spend
time
 with her to render her proper care so, that she should get healthy as soon as possible. After consulting her doctor, he suggested that she
requires
Correct subject-verb agreement
require
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 care
along with
 a proper diet and exercise plan for one month to recover properly.
Therefore
, I need 45 days leave to spend
time
 with her for recovery and spend some quality
time
 with her.
Initially
, some of my meetings are going to be attended by my junior Adam who is the assistant manager of my department. I am going to manage some relentless meetings online as well.
However
, as I will be away, I promise you I will work on weekends as well after my return to manage and arrange the previous tasks properly. I hope you understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.
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task achievement
Ensure that the explanation for taking time off is concise and directly to the point to maintain clarity.
coherence cohesion
Break down lengthy paragraphs to contain single ideas to enhance readability.
task achievement
The letter maintains a formal and respectful tone throughout, suitable for a workplace setting.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear structure to the letter with an introduction, body, and conclusion, making it easy to follow.
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