Write atleast 150 words and spend no more than 20 minutes on this task. You are new to the city and you would like to take your family out for a meal. Write a letter to your friend who is familiar with the city. In your letter: • Tell him or her about the occasion • Tell him or her about what kind of a restaurant you prefer • Ask him suitable recommendations Start with Dear..............,

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Dear Sarah, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing
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letter to request that you help me to find a good quality restaurant where I can take my family to have lunch. I have come with my family to the native to celebrate our great festival,
Onam
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, I am planning to take them out for a day and have food from a restaurant. Unfortunately, I am unaware of good restaurants which provide tasty food. As it is an
onam
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season, we wish to have Kerala's traditional food item,
Onam
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sadhya. Since my parents are always pure vegetarians, I prefer pure vegetarian hotels. So if you can recommend
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the best pure veg hotels which serve delicious
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onam
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sadhya, it will be appreciated. I look forward to hearing from you. Take care, my friend, and see you soon. Yours lovingly, Rahul.

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Task response: You answer all parts, but add one more clear detail about the day or meal plan.
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Task response: Use more exact words for the place, for example say the city name, not 'the native'.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Your ideas are in a good order. Try to link them with easy words like 'also', 'because', and 'so'.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Keep spaces and word forms correct, like 'Onam season' and 'vegetarian restaurant'.
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Task response: You cover the reason, the food you want, and the request for help.
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Task response: The tone is warm and polite for a letter to a friend.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear opening, body, and ending.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Most paragraphs have one main idea, so the letter is easy to follow.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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